The direction of my work on the book has continued and in this draft the only change I have made are by 1) introducing a table of contents and 2) two altering the headings slightly, and 3) changing the image selection. I am pleased with this.
M y B o d y
M y H e a l t h
M y K i t
M y H o m e
M y S t r e e t
M y C o u n t r y
M y E x p e r i e n c e
M y C o m m u n i t y
M y D r e a m s
Y o u r R u l e s
O u r E v o l u t i o n
O n e E x p l a n a t i o n
Image Selection
M y B o d y: I have stuck with the My Body collage but its not quite right (and I don’t mean because it’s monochrome as that is intended to imbue the image with a sense of false documentary evidential power).
M y H e a l t h: I like the My Health images but the format is not correct – they need to work as a group in terms of form.
M y K i t: This section works well. But maybe the reason I am un-comfy with the My Body images because I am using two different photographic approaches to evoke a faux documentary feel?
M y H o m e: I am pretty content with this selection as it offers a slightly surreal feel.
M y S t r e e t: This paid work well together.
M y C o u n t r y: This selection doesn’t work well as a group – they are currently just a set of random images.
M y E x p e r i e n c e: This section is important and far from working well. Lots of work needed hear.
M y C o m m u n i t y: I like the idea of this approach with a collage of lots of people’s voices and will keep experimenting with backgrounds.
M y D r e a m s: I am happy with these.
Y o u r R u l e s: The selection here is two long and the approaches too diverse for the images to work together as a chapter. More work needed.
O u r E v o l u t i o n: I did like this when I put it in but now hate it as its far too simplistic and flawed both conceptually and in exicution.
O n e E x p l a n a t i o n: This is a holding section for the essay.
Overview
Here is a pdf of this version.
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